UC知道帮我看看下面这段话有什么语法错误或者其他不好的，很短的
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Hello,dear my claasmates,
It is my first speech in this term.i am very excited.hope I can have a good speech.today,let me tell you about the most unforgetable day in my summer vacation.
You know july 19th .it is a different day for chinese sweeties. That day is called the Chinese Valentines' Day because it falls on July.7 in lunar calendar.That day was my first Valentine's Day in my life are you surprised? Please listen to me patiently
It is my first speech in this term.i am very excited.hope I can have a good speech.today,let me tell you about the most unforgetable day in my summer vacation.
You know july 19th .it is a different day for chinese sweeties. That day is called the Chinese Valentines' Day because it falls on July.7 in lunar calendar.That day was my first Valentine's Day in my life are you surprised? Please listen to me patiently
1.'dear my claasmates'应为'my dear classmates'，否则意思就成了“天哪！我的同学！”
2.'hope I can have a good speech'...?没有主语？还是忘打了？应该句首有个'I'，否则只能用于口语
3.'the Chinese Valentines' Day'不知道是否有这样的翻译，个人认为容易歧义，容易理解成“中国情人的节日”，要翻译“中国的情人节”我推荐'The Valentines' Day of(in) China'
4.'are you surprised?'前面是不是有个句号？估计你是忘记打上来了吧？~~~
这就是我的意见和建议了，希望你能满意。