诚恳求帮助, 请帮我看看我的英文句有没有写错了

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My name is Ji Xin Li, you can call me Emily. I am from China.I came to Chicago about one year. Every thing is adventure to me. I like everything expect bugs, because I think they look very disgusting to me. I usually reading some joke books that can make me to laugh, and watch some English movies with subtitle on the weekend, because that can help me to improve English.

My name is Jixin Li, you can call me Emily. I am Chinese, but I have been in Chicago for about one year. Here in Chicago, everything seems to be adventures to me. I like everything expect bugs, because I think they are very disgusting. I usually read some jokes and watch some English movies,(with subtitles) on the weekends, as these may help me to improve my English.
大体修改了一下，不过这个写得。。干吗要提到臭虫让自己恶心呢？

I came to Chicago about one year.
I have been in Chicago about one year.

make me to laugh
make me laugh

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有误，你最好把中文加上，再看你的表达

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