翻译 这是我第一次访问这城市

这是我第一次访问这城市：
This is I first time visits this city .
我们本来希望你能来 但你没有来
到了十二岁那年 爱迪生开始自己的谋生
明天此时 你已经到达上海了
你老是改变主意
我到达山顶时 阳光灿烂
那时 人们不知道地球是动的 ：
We originally hoped you can come but you not to come
Started own making a living to 12 year old of that year Edison
This time you already will arrive Shanghai tomorrow
You change the mind
I arrive when the summit the sunlight is bright
The at that time people did not know the Earth is moves

This is the first time I visit this city

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