看看我这个英语作文,大家修改一下

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/31 19:24:25
Baidu search is pretty terrible,much too ads and waste information make me crazy,but Google is not because I can get what I want quickly.Things are different one year ago,why it change so quick?I think Baidu angle for money and consider little for consumers, if the businessman pay more money their websites can search easily and arrange at the frontal page,now Baidu is not a tool for public freely,it is a machine to make money,please remember the consumer is away,Baidu is disappear.
题目是 Baidu should make an extra effort

问题比较多，改后的文章你看看如何？

The search engine Baidu is rather(不能用pretty，语义不一样) terrible,the sea of ads and rubish information on it makes me mad(;crazy暗含喜欢之意)。By contrast, Google is better for I can get what I want much quicker.Things were different one year ago,why it changed so unbelivably?I think that Baidu angles for money and considers little for its users. If the businessmen pay more money to Baidu, their websites can be easily found and be shown at the frontal page. Now Baidu is not a tool for public but a machine to make money.Please remember the viewers are the real reason that Baidu exists.
题目是 Baidu needs to change.

你不是google派来的吧

Things are different 改成 Things were/got different
it change 改成 changes
quick 改成 quickly
angle 改成 angles consider 改成 considers
search 改成 be searched out
easily 改成 more easily 因为你前面用的是more money
arrange 改成 arranged
frontal 改成 more frontal
最后一句最好是 Pls keep in mind that if the consumer is aw