修改我的英语作文

south pole is very beautiful.even though there are not many flowers and trees,i like it very much .because they are white anyway.there are many penguins．they looks very lovely.people can't live there for a long time because it is bitterly cold there.I think I will try to live there when I grow up~~
Here 企鸸 should be 企鹅

because it's white anyway.there are many 企鸸s

because there are white anyway. 这里anyway我觉得你应该是anywhere.

\"because there are white anyway.there are many 企鸸．they are very lovely.people can\'t live there for a long time.\"

1.i think \"anyway\" should be \"everywhere\"
then

2.it is better to use some conj. to connect the sentences.

south pole is very beautiful.even though there are not many flowers and trees,i like it very much __since there are white everywhere and particularly many penguins can be found in south pole.because of the bitterly co