UC知道今天考试，写了篇英语日记，大家看看通不通顺。
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Today is oxam day.In the moming, We have no park. I went to the Bazhong
do oxam-chinese.
In the aftemoon,I went to the Bazhong do oxam-arith.Then are go to
park,and training to Xingyiquan. I had a busy day today.
oct.13.2007.sat rain
do oxam-chinese.
In the aftemoon,I went to the Bazhong do oxam-arith.Then are go to
park,and training to Xingyiquan. I had a busy day today.
oct.13.2007.sat rain
I went to the Bazhong to do exam-chinese.
go to+地点+to do sth 意为去某地做某事 （动词不定式）
In the aftemoon,I went to the Bazhong to do exam-arith.Then we went to park,and training to Xingyiquan. 有时态的毛病，应该用一般过去时，而且句子不够通顺，如果十分满分可能扣4分以上！
oxam 是exam考试 后面也有这样的错误 应该是打错了同时日记都是用过去时 时态的问题要注意
Then are go to park,and training to Xingyiquan.不通顺阿 应该是Then we go to
park,and training to Xingyiquan.