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I found a fat beauty in a episode of a popular show recently,very chubby.It's difficult for her to run.One of my friends told me that it's my tomorrow if I don't do anything to stop my growing weight.wow!
I have a healthy diet for a long time,and i quit potato chip,fry chicken and quick-serve meal and I eat 80% full each meal .but I lack sports.I get myself a brand new environment since I removed from home.I don't know go where to do sports,do what kind of sports.any suggestions?

in a episode 应该是an 吧
very chubby会不会多余 呢?
it's my tomorrow if I don't do anything to stop my growing weight.明显中国英语,应该说 you will be like her
后面growing weight应该是take on weight
quick-serve 应该是quick-served吧
I have a healthy diet for a long time,and i quit potato chip,fry chicken and quick-serve meal and I eat 80% full each meal这句话太多and
brand new environment 这个其实就是I have a new environment in my new home.
I don't know go where to do sports应该是I don't know where to do sports
后面直接and what kind of sports,不用do