请帮忙看看，这句话是否正确（英语）

We should face the realities but we can change our life by studying and struggling.

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by study and endeavor

We need to face the reality, but we can struggle through learning and change our own destiny.

我们需要面对现实，但我们可以通过学习和奋斗改变自己的命运。

we should face the realities but we can change our life by study and by endeavor

we should face the realities. however, we also should understand that, through learning and struggling for ourselves, we are able to change the bad things in reality.