UC知道帮我检查一下这封邮件的语法
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So long did not receive your letter. I think you must be very busy. I'm very tired. "tired" is ours class the most popular word,LOL.
We have a sports camp tomorrow. That make me excited. Have a good time.
Thursday is bad day. Because that day we have a geography exam. God bless me.
It's time to watch TV. Good bye! Write to me soon.
We have a sports camp tomorrow. That make me excited. Have a good time.
Thursday is bad day. Because that day we have a geography exam. God bless me.
It's time to watch TV. Good bye! Write to me soon.
did not receive改为have not received
...改为"tiredness"is the most popular word in our class
we have a sports这里改为We will have a...这里最好把句号改为逗号,然后把THAT改为WHICH MAKES ME VERY EXCITED.Hope we will have a good time.
IS BAD DAY前面要加一个a.BECAUSE这句也要加WILL.
最后一段,最好加上GOOD BYE,TAKE CARE!
WRITE TO ME SOON最好改为Hope to hear from you soon.
It has been so long since I received your letter last time. I think you must be busy. I'm very tired. "tired" is the most popular word in ours class. LOL.
We will have a sports campaign tomorrow. That makes me excited. I hope we will have a good time.
Thursday will be a bad day. Because we will have a geography exam on that day. God bless me.
It's time to watch TV. Good bye! Write to me soon.