UC知道谁能帮我改一下英语作文（高中）？？
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/11 19:25:32
Our factory make a new food-Pancake now.It makes by rice、maize、grease、cream and so on.And we make many different kinds of it.And we use the especially ways to make it,just like fring or baking.So,our pancake is very delicious.We will taste the good smell in long times when we eat it.And the important is that we add many nutrient materials.It is good for old or young people.So,many people all like eating it.The edible methods is that is open that is food ,or regard as a snack. Please buy it and taste it, you will fell good of it!
最好能给一下得分（满分25）谢谢……
是做广告吗?
也许你应该把作文题发上来的.
算了,我来写写看吧:
You know what?Our factory had developed a new product!
It's pancake which is made from rice,maize,grease,cream and so on.And there are really many different kinds,which gives you a lot of choices.Furthermore,we use a special way to make it,such as firing,baking and so on.As a result,our pancake is of great taste,and the sweet smell will last long.What's more important,it's full of nutrition,which can comfort your body and makes you more healthy.So it's really good for both young and old.
The edible methods is to just open the package,and eat.You can also bring it to a picnic since it can be a good snack.
Now it's available in every supermarkets.What are you waiting for?Just go ahead and buy it!You can never miss such wonderful taste!
啊!!!我的天哪~我把你的意思搞错了!哎!害我写了这么半天(平时在学校写也要半个小时呢)
伤心啊~
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好吧,我还是回答一下吧:
我也觉得有好多地方不很对,
但我可以猜出来是什么意思,
也就是说,也许你有中国式思维,
这影