谁帮我翻译并分析下句子结构（英语）

A child (主语) learning to talk (定语，用来修饰主语child) does not learn (谓语) by being corrected all the time (状语，用来修饰learn) :
if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.

一个正在学习说话的孩子并不是靠被人不断的纠正错误来学习的。
如果矫枉过正，他就会不再说话。

一个学说话的孩子不是在总是被纠正中学会的，如果纠正太多，他就会（停止）不说话了。

A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time:if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.

实际上是两个句子。
A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time:

第一个句子A child 主语 learning to talk 定语does not learn (talking)谓语动词

第二个句子：if(he is)correctet too much, he will stop talking.
if 引导的条件状语从句，被动语态。主句he 主语 will stop 谓语动词 talking 宾语

A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time :if corrected too much ,he will stop talking.

一个学习说话的孩子不需要每时每刻都纠正：如果纠正得太多，他会不再说话的。

分析句子结构：
A child（主语）learning to talk（定语） does not learn（谓语） by being corrected all the time（状语） :if corr