●翻译了一首歌成英文,大家来挑错,挑出最多的给分

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/23 22:34:36
今天上英语课想起这首歌,就翻译了一下,只是一时冲动,实在是献丑了,就是想提高下英语,大家尽管挑毛病吧。
希望不要满口讥讽,我是很真诚的请大家挑错,挑出最多的拿分。

你一定要幸福
歌手:何洁 词:唐恬 曲:吴梦奇

沿着路灯一个人走回家
和老朋友打电话
你那里天气好吗
有什么新闻可以当作笑话

回忆与我都不爱说话
偶尔我会想起他
心里有一些牵挂
有些爱却不得不各安天涯

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话
赌一把幸福的筹码
在人来人往的街头想起他
他现在好吗
可我没有能给你想要的回答

可是你一定要幸福呀

我的翻译:

Sure to be happy

Walking under the street light alone to my home, phoning an old friend, "What's the weather like there? Anything interesting to share with me?

Memory and I are both silent, I still think of him occasionally. Something is hard to forget. But some love is destined to be apart.

Remind of the flowers you gave me with your most emotional love words in the wholly quiet night, which was all used to bet on a truly love.

Remind of you at the rackety street, "are you fine now? Though I didn't give you the answer y

沿着路灯一个人走回家 walk home alone, down the street lights
和老朋友打电话 make a call to an old friend
你那里天气好吗 How's the weather there?
有什么新闻可以当作笑话 any news is worth a laugh?

回忆与我都不爱说话 I enjoy silence with memories
偶尔我会想起他 think of him sometimes
心里有一些牵挂 some concerns lingering inside
有些爱却不得不各安天涯 love sometimes has to be apart

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花 think of his flowers when the night is silent
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话 and some crushing love words he said
赌一把幸福的筹码 bet on my own happiness
在人来人往的街头想起他 remember him in the busy street
他现在好吗 is he all right?
可我没有能给你想要的回答but I have no reply for you

可是你一定要幸福呀 but make sure be happy

都翻译的差不多了..挺好.

有什么新闻可以当作笑话
Is there anything can be a joke?

回忆与我都不爱说话
Memories keep silent as the way I did.

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话
It reminds me that the flowers he gave to me,and the loving word that he said to me in this quiet night.