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a. Among of three hotels suitable hold the conference’s is The Chancellors Hotel & Conference centre, It has the complete hold conference facility. Has regular conference room. Has Internet Services wake up services. Transportation is convenient; it is reasonable price and comfortable environment.

b. According to the arrangement of time arrangement, the conference members had better take the British Airways’ 1607 flight to go to Manchester on 23, January. Their will arrive in Manchester at 4:20pm, have a rest and eaten the dinner, prepares the matter about second days’ conference. Because by train need to spend long time, at the same time, by air could avoid be crowded who by train, Saturday is the peak by train.

c. The conference members will use the car, Budget’s car is a good choice, the company has good prestige in local, it is complete vehicle type, could found the model which you need relaxed, it has expensive price , as well as air conditioning Provided

(*sigh* Way too damned long...)

a. Among of three hotels suitable hold the conference’s is The Chancellors Hotel & Conference centre, It has the complete hold conference facility. Has regular conference room. Has Internet Services wake up services. Transportation is convenient; it is reasonable price and comfortable environment.

(Among the three hotels, the Chancellor's Hotel & Conference Center is the one suitable for holding the conference. It has a complete conference facility, with large conference rooms, internet services, wake up services, convenient transportation at a reasonable price and comfortable atmosphere.)

b. According to the arrangement of time arrangement, the conference members had better take the British Airways’ 1607 flight to go to Manchester on 23, January. Their will arrive in Manchester at 4:20pm, have a rest and eaten the dinner, prepares the matter about second days’ conference. Because by train need to spend long time,