急！！！语法有没有错误？

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要去应征去新加坡的工作机会，要求能用英语自我介绍，自己写了一点，但不知道语法是否错误，怕到时候出笑话，所以请教各位高手给予指点，谢谢
I graduate form zhejiang institute of mechancial&electrical engineering in 2005.my

major is Electron engineering.In school I have spent much's time on studying for 3 years, i

have gained the intermediate certificate of electron,i have passed the cet3.and i have

acquired basic knowledge of Electron and mechancial both in theory and in practice.
In past 2 years, i worked in Chinese network communication Ltd. Be company's person in

charge , Be in charge of exterior lines construction and rush to repair mainly. This job

for 2 years life , I have got much's work experience. Include the independent the ability

getting to work and synergetic ability of team. Besides work i enjoy playing basketball

much!Sports give me a healthy body and tough mind.
Singapore is my Mecca , being able to get rid of there job is my

I graduated form Zhejiang Institute of Mechancial&electrical engineering in 2005.
My

major is Electron engineering.In school I have spent 3 years on studying , i

have gained the intermediate certificate of electron, i have passed the cet3.and i have

acquired basic knowledge of Electron and mechancial both in theory and in practice.

In past 2 years, i worked in Chinese network communication Ltd. As company's member ,I'm in charge of exterior lines construction and rush to repair mainly.

Having done this job
for 2 years life , I have got much work experience. Including the independent ability

of getting to work and synergetic ability of teamwork. Besides work, i enjoy playing basketball very much!Sports give me a healthy body and tough mind.
Singapore is my Mecca , being able to get the job is my honour. i hope i can

study English better in Singapore .I will do my best to wor