UC知道请各位帮我看看简历，看有什么问题，谢谢！
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Education Background
2004¬/08—2008/07 Dept. of Art, Changchun University of Science and technology, B.E..
Objective
To obtain a challenging position related to Ad. & Marketing where I can bring my initiative and creativity into full play.
Basic Skills
Having a good command of both spoken and written English, past CET-4;
Good at driving, gained car-droved card (C1)
Proficient with office software, skilled in use of Photoshop、Coreldraw、Pagemaker、Eduis and Premire
Scholarships and Awards
2004-2007 Academic Progress Award six times;
2005-2006 Outstanding Student Leader Award
Employment Experience
2007/07—2007/08 Started an internship in Bowen film Ad. Co., writing film Ad. Text, doing activity planning
2007/04 A market investigator of Fengzhong Co., participated in market survey
2006/07 Worked in Gai Delan market survey Co. in Statistic Administration of Changchun, responsible for telephone visiti
2004¬/08—2008/07 Dept. of Art, Changchun University of Science and technology, B.E..
Objective
To obtain a challenging position related to Ad. & Marketing where I can bring my initiative and creativity into full play.
Basic Skills
Having a good command of both spoken and written English, past CET-4;
Good at driving, gained car-droved card (C1)
Proficient with office software, skilled in use of Photoshop、Coreldraw、Pagemaker、Eduis and Premire
Scholarships and Awards
2004-2007 Academic Progress Award six times;
2005-2006 Outstanding Student Leader Award
Employment Experience
2007/07—2007/08 Started an internship in Bowen film Ad. Co., writing film Ad. Text, doing activity planning
2007/04 A market investigator of Fengzhong Co., participated in market survey
2006/07 Worked in Gai Delan market survey Co. in Statistic Administration of Changchun, responsible for telephone visiti
建议：
1. car-droved card =〉driver's license
2. skilled in use of Photoshop=> skilled in Photoshop
3. face up all challenges => face all challenges
4. suit for all the situations => suitable for all situations
总体不错,不过有一些小毛病，例如past应改成passed,有的词后需加s，变成复数，有的词听起来不太顺，我不知道你具体学过什么，不过用词时三思而后行