这个句子怎么连接好?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/23 13:26:21
During my work,I am in charge of developing software。Meanwhile,I was sent to take part in IMS,a network system。In this project,my duty ranged from writing text to testing system。With the heavy workload,I have developed work experience。。。。

觉得连接的不好,好象不太通顺,怎么改啊,另外时态什么的也不太对,怎么改啊?

第一句的时态是现在时,跟后面过去时不搭配.
还有,最后一句应为"虽然...但是"结构,逻辑上有些问题,最后修改如下:

During my work,I was in charge of the software developing section and at the same time sent to take part in IMS,a network system,in which I've done a lot,from taking notes to testing systems.Though that's indeed a heavy burden,I've developed precious working experiences.

I am in charge of developing software at my work. I was sent to take part in developing a network system called IMS. My duty in this project ranged from writing text to testing system. Because of the heavy workload, I developed my work experience....

I am in charge of developing software during my work.(表示事实 就用一般现在)I was sent to take part in IMS which is a network system.In this project,my duty ranged from writing text to testing system。I have developed work experience with the heavy workload.