这个句子怎么连接好?
来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/23 13:26:21
觉得连接的不好,好象不太通顺,怎么改啊,另外时态什么的也不太对,怎么改啊?
第一句的时态是现在时,跟后面过去时不搭配.
还有,最后一句应为"虽然...但是"结构,逻辑上有些问题,最后修改如下:
During my work,I was in charge of the software developing section and at the same time sent to take part in IMS,a network system,in which I've done a lot,from taking notes to testing systems.Though that's indeed a heavy burden,I've developed precious working experiences.
I am in charge of developing software at my work. I was sent to take part in developing a network system called IMS. My duty in this project ranged from writing text to testing system. Because of the heavy workload, I developed my work experience....
I am in charge of developing software during my work.(表示事实 就用一般现在)I was sent to take part in IMS which is a network system.In this project,my duty ranged from writing text to testing system。I have developed work experience with the heavy workload.