UC知道下面的英文通顺吗，如果有什么错误，请指正。谢谢，很急!
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What color is the Olympic game in 2008?This is a marvellous problem, different person's treating this problem will also have different answer.
Perhaps athletics the fans will say the Olympic ga athletics me in Peking will be a beauty color of, red is jump about of flames of color, whenever this was the time that a nation jumped up at the time that Olympic flame set alight!Is the time that the race dreams of a realization!Red symbol enthusiasm, that time, Peking of the midsummer of August will with very hot liver to welcome the whole world friend for coming from five lakes!
Also someone will say, the Olympic game in Peking is green.Really, the green is a peaceful symbol, is the body of athletics spirit now in the demonstration.
So, what does the green still represent?That's right, is our living environments, is the color of our global village!
The first of science and technology a long distance of today, people didn't neglect to good care of the environme
Perhaps athletics the fans will say the Olympic ga athletics me in Peking will be a beauty color of, red is jump about of flames of color, whenever this was the time that a nation jumped up at the time that Olympic flame set alight!Is the time that the race dreams of a realization!Red symbol enthusiasm, that time, Peking of the midsummer of August will with very hot liver to welcome the whole world friend for coming from five lakes!
Also someone will say, the Olympic game in Peking is green.Really, the green is a peaceful symbol, is the body of athletics spirit now in the demonstration.
So, what does the green still represent?That's right, is our living environments, is the color of our global village!
The first of science and technology a long distance of today, people didn't neglect to good care of the environme
你把你要写的中文意思给我们我们才能批改啊,呵呵.
说实话,你这个好象是用中文一个单词一个单词翻译的.总体来说词语用的很死,不够贴切.你看看第一个句子是一个文句,而你却是用了陈述句的句式.应该把is提前.然后英文和中文是不一样的,每说完一个意思是要点住的,不能一逗到底.下面一句,虽然英文用的名词多可是,你用的different person's treating this problem就有点不知所云了.我觉得你好象应该在网上找几篇,然后修改成自己的,更为好而快一点
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