From now I try to write diary in English有语法错误吗

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From now I try to write diary in English
If you found something wrong you must tell me.
Because my English is poor.
I want to worked in Chartered Bank
So English is very importent.
I must study every day
although tried and diffcult but I carry through
then now I tell you a new word
Bankruptcy(means a man who lose own money)
In Chinese is 破产者
Ok
I feel sleepy.
Goodnight
zzZ
See you tomorrow,

应该是From now on.....
是 从今以后 的意思

If you find anything 不是something

I want to work in Chartered bank 动词不定式, 用原型

although I am tired and it is diffcult, I carry through
缺少主语, I, it, 还有, 用了although就不能再用but
英文里面 虽然, 和 但是 只要出现一个就可以了

第一句就觉得过于中文化
从现在开始是from now on

除了第三句很贴切其他都有错误或很生硬。。