英语专业的高手来!做得好有加分!

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这是一封回信!帮看看不妥之处并且修改,说明理由!有劳了!

Receives your letter to let me feel that is very accidental and is happy, I am a Chinese, had not thought that could receive foreign friend's letter, the feeling is really too good!

I use this website the time am not very long, here and the domestic music website has many differences, therefore I felt that is very interesting! Sometimes I will go to have a look at the foreign friend to listen to any song, therefore has discovered you!
You use the picture is very funny and lovable, what foreign friend am I very curious in the use, wants to know that he is listening to any song,
China too has been really far to Britain, therefore the network really too has been sometimes bad, is very regrettable, I have not been able to listen to the song which likes to you, but always has the opportunity!
In here, everybody has the common hobby, that is a music!

I do not understand English, now is studying, felt is really v

1.Receives your letter to let me feel that is very accidental and is happy 这一句is happy的is应该去掉,重复!
2.had not thought that could receive foreign friend's letter 典型的中国式翻译,呵呵,可以这样翻译 :Did not expect to receive a letter from the foreign friends.
3.I use this website the time am not very long, 语法结构有些混乱,信件要明了,不要花哨,这样就ok :I use this website is not a long time
4.here and the domestic music website has many differences 前面的here明显是犯的一个中国式错误,但也不至于错,改成it吧.
5.I will go to have a look at the foreign friend to listen to any song 你是去浏览网页吧,呵呵,不可以用go to ,最好去掉,还有说清楚,可以在句末加上in the websiet.把any换成some,你用的太绝对,(后同)
6.therefore has discovered you! 英语不同于汉语,称呼可以省略,但是英语一定要加上,即使翻译的时候不翻译出来,所以应该在therefore后加上I
7.what foreign friend am I very curious in the use句子有些混乱啊,书信一定要简明,可以这样Which one can be such a good foreign use of these picture
8.wants to know that he is listening to any song 搞不懂啊,没有主语,不明白
9.China too has been really far to Britain 语法严重错误,China is very far away fr