UC知道跪请英文高手看一下我的英文简历，帮忙指正 谢谢
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PROFILE:
• Extensive background in the sales management and training of Fast Moving Consumer Goods; working in the American company long time assume the office of sales and training manager.
• Had good people management and communication skills. Team player
• Saled in the market many years, have lots of experience of terminal marketing
• Familiar with Fashion and Luxury.
• Accomplished in Computer(National Computer Rank Examination Grade 2),English(CET4) and Mandarin(National Mandarin Rank Examination Grade 1)
EMPLOYMENT:
Markwins International Co., Ltd. 2006 – Present
Sales and Training Deputy Manager
• Taken charge of whole country trains the planned establishment and training the regional manager.
• Managed the sales of North China and East China independently
Jiaqi Fine Chemical Co., Ltd. 2005 – 2006
The Chinese Chief Trains Teacher
• Planed and complet
• Extensive background in the sales management and training of Fast Moving Consumer Goods; working in the American company long time assume the office of sales and training manager.
• Had good people management and communication skills. Team player
• Saled in the market many years, have lots of experience of terminal marketing
• Familiar with Fashion and Luxury.
• Accomplished in Computer(National Computer Rank Examination Grade 2),English(CET4) and Mandarin(National Mandarin Rank Examination Grade 1)
EMPLOYMENT:
Markwins International Co., Ltd. 2006 – Present
Sales and Training Deputy Manager
• Taken charge of whole country trains the planned establishment and training the regional manager.
• Managed the sales of North China and East China independently
Jiaqi Fine Chemical Co., Ltd. 2005 – 2006
The Chinese Chief Trains Teacher
• Planed and complet
working in the American company long time assume the office of sales and training manager.
这句话有问题，你是否还在从事这个工作？不是的话不应该用working in.
assume你在这里想指的是什么意思？
Had good people management and communication skills
这句话换成Excellent people management and communication skills
aled in the market many years 这句话不通的
还有一些问题啦。。。。不一一指出了
我全读了一遍，我觉得大体上应该没错，细节的小问题我就看不出来了。