我要写封信给一家外资企业,请高人指点下,帮我改下,好吗

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在上个礼拜五与您愉快的交谈后,我很急切的等待着您的回应。我很希望到贵公司来工作,如果您也觉得我是合适的人选,请尽快告诉我。

after a happy conversation with you on last Friday, I'm very urgent to get your response. I hoped very much to work in your firm. If you also thought that I am the appropriate people, please as soon as possible tell me.

After the nice conversation with you last Friday, I am waiting for good news from you eagerly. I am realy looking forward to join your company, please inform me immediately if I am lucky to be the right person. Thanks a lot.

after a happy conversation with you on last Friday, I'm am looking forward to getting your further reply.I expect to work in your firm urgently. If you also thought I am the appropriate candidate, please kindly inform me as soon as possible.