请确认一下翻译!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/31 02:06:09
中文的意思是:
请查收附件!
是关于***料件的联络单,因为此料件厦门不在生产,将转到苏州。
因此要取消息交货单3240801214021。
感谢各位同事的配合!
英文翻译如下:
please cheack the attachment.
It's about material *** notice,this material didn't manufacture at xiamen ,will displace suzhou.
so cancel the invoice 324080124021.
thank all workmate cooperate!

这样的英文翻译哪里有不妥的地方吗?还请指出,谢谢!

Please cheack the attachment. p大写
It's about material *** liaison(联络单).Because this material is not manufactured at Xiamen ,it will be displaced to suzhou.
And we have to cancel the delivery order(交货单) 324080124021.
Thanks for your cooperation!

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