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One world one dream
I was very excited when I heard that Beising won the bid for the 2008 olympic Games, and the slogan is:"one world one dream . we are proud of it,I want to be a volunteer of Beising olympic Games, I realized the time flies, I must study English very hard, because English is very useful and it is very important, And to be a volunteer of the olympic Games is good for myself too. I can make some friends from different countries and learn more about sport about Olympic. But the first thing is study hard. I am confident I will be a good volunteer and I will show the world that our country and our city are so perfect in the world. I hope all the foreigns and chinese can come to Beising to watch the olympic Games in 2008, then I will be very happy to be your guide!
I was very excited when I heard that Beising won the bid for the 2008 olympic Games, and the slogan is:"one world one dream . we are proud of it,I want to be a volunteer of Beising olympic Games, I realized the time flies, I must study English very hard, because English is very useful and it is very important, And to be a volunteer of the olympic Games is good for myself too. I can make some friends from different countries and learn more about sport about Olympic. But the first thing is study hard. I am confident I will be a good volunteer and I will show the world that our country and our city are so perfect in the world. I hope all the foreigns and chinese can come to Beising to watch the olympic Games in 2008, then I will be very happy to be your guide!
同一个世界,同一个梦想
当我听到北京进入2008年奥林匹克运动会的时候,我真的很激动.口号是"同一个世界,同一个梦想",我们为此自豪.我很想成为北京奥林匹克运动会的一名自愿者.我意识到时刻的重要性.我必须努力学习英语,因为因故很有用并且很重要.并且成为一个奥林匹克运动会的一名自愿者对我自己也很有帮助的.我可以结交到来自世界各地的朋友们和了解更多关于奥林匹克的运动.但是首先必须努力学习,我自信.我能成为一名好的自愿者并且向世界展示我们的国家和城市是如此的漂亮，完美.我希望所有的外国朋友和中国朋友都能来北京观看北京2008奥运会,我很乐意成为你们的导游.