UC知道评论一篇文章，并指出缺点修改，追加
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Everyday,I got a present,this present is-------time.the present tell me I must cherish time,I must did a good job anything.God give me a nice present,but this is present is good or bad,I can chenge it.
谢谢，不过这个是完整的，帮忙提一下意见，并且整体文章如何
Everyday,I get a present,this present is-------time.the present tells me that I must cherish time,I must do well in anything.God gave me a nice present,no better how good or bad this present is,i will always be able to change it.Treasure every moment that you have! Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is mystery. Today is a rare gift.Yesterday has become the history, the bright natural law remote cannot know, but today is a gift, therefore English is called "the present" Present, please treasure this gift.
谢谢，不过这个是完整的，帮忙提一下意见，并且整体文章如何
Everyday,I get a present,this present is-------time.the present tells me that I must cherish time,I must do well in anything.God gave me a nice present,no better how good or bad this present is,i will always be able to change it.Treasure every moment that you have! Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is mystery. Today is a rare gift.Yesterday has become the history, the bright natural law remote cannot know, but today is a gift, therefore English is called "the present" Present, please treasure this gift.
括号里面是应该改成的
Everyday,I got(get) a present,this present is-------time.the present tell（tells） me (that) I must cherish time,I must did(do) a good job (把a good job改成well in) anything.God give(gave) me a nice present,but this is present is good or bad,(把整个一句话改成no matter how good or bad this present is )I can chenge it.（把这句话改为I'll always be able to change it)
作者有抓住时间并把握时间的思想，是一个懂得奋进、珍惜每一份每一秒的人。然而英语文章中错误较多，应抓紧时间学好英语！