UC知道高手看下我的ielts 作文,我菜得很
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评个分吧,....唉,看了你们的评论我心都凉了.....真的很灰心阿..就只有40多天了,资料也没有,国外也没什么补习班,只有考你们帮我改下作文了(最好把原文复制下来,然后把有问题的地方加个小括号,再修改.谢谢啦).........我要绝望了......................................................................
问题1.你字数不够
2.诸多语法错误
3.用此用句都单一
英国佬那么聪明，你那么明显又错误百出的凑字数你觉得可能吗？！
写作不好最好天天练，算好时间写，大作文40分钟，小作文20分钟！多练题目，还是会有提高的。
但是你现在的问题是把基础先大好~
确实试找喷的。
第一句 nowadays就拼错了，单词拼写不说，还有最基本的动词单复数也错的。而且你的论据找的不是很充足，基本上是在凑字。
我英语也很垃圾，只是尽点微薄之力吧。最关键的还是你好好复习或者参加个语言班什么的。
考试和在中国比据说会比较难。我也不太清楚，过会刚好有个朋友考回来我问问咯。
下面的文章我帮你改了一下语法！
Nowadays, television has become more popular. The percentage of family which have television is more than 94%. Television has been a part of family. as a result ,television is important for our life. But, recently, a argument of television that it plays a positive or negative role in family is getting commonly. Most people believe that we toad much time for television and some of programmes are not good for children’s growing up, Watching television is just waste of time. but other people take an opposite side ,as for me
First and foremost, with the development of society ,people are suffer from more stress of