UC知道英语高手进来帮忙改改语法错误！！
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以下是自我介绍，英语高手指点一下语法啊错误啊！谢谢！！
Good morning, dear teacher.It's a fine day today,and I'm very glad to be here for this interview. First of all,let me introduce myself. My name is ***, I was born on *****. I came from ****, a famous city with a long history. I'm a North man, Therefore, I have the northerner's Integrity, simple and frank character. I am graduating from the College of Economy Law of Northwest University of Political & law this July. In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.I am skillful in seaching for information in internet.I am a NBA fan for years.Los Angeles Lakers is my favorite team.
In the past one year I try my best to prepare for the postgraduate examination.Now,all my hard work has got a result beacause I have got a chance to be interview by you. Through four years of university study, I have a system of jurisprudence theoretical
Good morning, dear teacher.It's a fine day today,and I'm very glad to be here for this interview. First of all,let me introduce myself. My name is ***, I was born on *****. I came from ****, a famous city with a long history. I'm a North man, Therefore, I have the northerner's Integrity, simple and frank character. I am graduating from the College of Economy Law of Northwest University of Political & law this July. In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.I am skillful in seaching for information in internet.I am a NBA fan for years.Los Angeles Lakers is my favorite team.
In the past one year I try my best to prepare for the postgraduate examination.Now,all my hard work has got a result beacause I have got a chance to be interview by you. Through four years of university study, I have a system of jurisprudence theoretical
(dear teacher.)应该不止一个老师,后面加s。--dear teachers
(It's a fine day today)语法没错，但是把fine换成nice会比较好。在结尾换成句号。然后接下来这一句“and I'm very glad to...”去掉and。
（I was born on *****.）这里应该是I was born in *****.
(I'm a North man) North的意思是北方，这里你应该要用形容词北方的，所以改为“I'm Northern man.”
先发着这一些，我等一会在继续帮你看。
I came from ****, 改I come from
many other youngers 改many other youth
I try my best to 改 I tried my best to
to be interview 改to be interviewed
jurisprudence theoretical knowledge改 theoretical knowledge in jurisprudence
deepen my knowledge 改 enhance my knowledge
Legal are playing 改Laws are playing
晦涩难懂，你说你面试，管这个day fine不fine的干吗。
开口跟人家说fine day,人家老师可能会觉得你是个funny guy,除非他也很funny。
自然点，别套，就好！