UC知道大家帮忙看下这英语写话有没有错，修改下，谢谢
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Last Winter Holiday
I went to Jiangsu last winter and the weather was bad and snowy. The food wasn't delicious to me, and it tasted yucky. I did a lot of things in winter, such as going to museums, and going around. There were many interesting things. The trip was really excited so I wrote to my friend. So my friend told me why not go to zhejiang. He said the scene is very beautiful in Hangzhou. The clear West Lake,the evergreen trees and the colourful flowers. And the traditional snacks are very delicious. wow!it is a heaven of human indeed!it made me exciting after i had heard of the words he said. So we decided to go to Hangzhou this Summer.
I went to Jiangsu last winter and the weather was bad and snowy. The food wasn't delicious to me, and it tasted yucky. I did a lot of things in winter, such as going to museums, and going around. There were many interesting things. The trip was really excited so I wrote to my friend. So my friend told me why not go to zhejiang. He said the scene is very beautiful in Hangzhou. The clear West Lake,the evergreen trees and the colourful flowers. And the traditional snacks are very delicious. wow!it is a heaven of human indeed!it made me exciting after i had heard of the words he said. So we decided to go to Hangzhou this Summer.
The trip was really exciting
The scene was
human>person
it made me excited
The trip was really exciting
and my friend told me why not go to zhejiang.
it made me excited
yucky?好像写错了
翻译是:去年冬季假期
我去了江苏，去年冬季和天气恶劣，雪域。食物不好吃，对我来说，和它尝到了yucky 。我做了很多事情，在冬季，如去博物馆，去左右。有很多有趣的事情。此行真的是兴奋，所以我写信给我的朋友。所以我的朋友告诉我，为什么不能去浙江。他说，现场是非常美丽的杭州。明确西湖，常绿树木和五颜六色花朵。和传统小吃都非常好吃。哇，这是一个天堂，人类确实！它令我兴奋后，我曾听过的话，他说。因此，我们决定去杭州在今年夏天。
The trip was really exciting
The scene was
human>person
it made me excited