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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/17 08:38:28
题目:商业银行信息披露和商业秘密保护的冲突与协调
摘要:商业银行信息披露制度和商业秘密保护制度的冲突并不仅仅是立法条款上的矛盾,而与信息披露制度和商业秘密保护制度本身的不足有深刻的关系。本文从商业银行信息披露和商业秘密保护两者冲突的表现形态和产生原因入手,借鉴国外的先进经验完善信息披露制度和商业秘密保护制度,并提出了协调两者冲突的具体制度设计。
Title: the conflict and coordination with information disclosure and commercial secrets protection of commercial banks
Abstract: the conflict between information disclosure system and commercial secret protection system of commercial banks is on legislative provisions, and is also the result of deficiency of information disclosure system and commercial secret protection system. Based on the phenomena and reasons of the conflict between information disclosure system and commercial secret protection system, the paper learns from the advanced experience of foreign countries to improve the system of information disclosure system and commercial secrets protection system, and proposes a specific system design for coordinating the conflict of the two.

Commercial bank information disclosure and business secret protection conflict and coordinated
The Commercial bank information disclosure system and the business secret protection system's conflict and is not only in the legislative provision contradiction, but has the profound relations with the information disclosure system and the business secret protection system's insufficiency. This article discloses and the business secret from the Commercial bank information protects both conflict the performance shape and has the reason to obtain, to profit from the overseas advanced experience consummation information disclosure system and the business secret protection system, and proposed is coordinated both conflict the concrete system design.

just so-so!

Your translation is much better than the first two responders - qb2008will and pkq_kitty. I checked over all the English answers made by the former who regarded your translation as just so-so and found many m