英译汉 帮忙找英语重的错误!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/16 02:22:42
看一下这段文字还有什么错误吗?
或者翻译上会有什么错误吗?
谢谢
I know it's crazy but you still can touch my heart.
I still believe, someday we will walk together on the beach with our hand held, forever.

我看着是没有,不知道其他网友看出什么了?

GOOD!It's OK, but for some small details like the 短语 holding hands:
I know it's crazy but you can still touch my heart.
I still believe someday we'll walk together on the beach holding hands, forever.

只有一个小问题,第二句话HAND要加S
这句话好像是我给你翻的,哈哈,果然写完作业要检查。。。

I know it's crazy but you can still touch my heart.
I still believe, someday we could walk together on the beach, hand in hand.

这样好点儿。