下面的一段英语能帮我看下有没错误么。。

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/13 20:02:17
Some students believe there are many good effects. They think the Olympics will encourage people in Beijing to learn English harder, help more people find jobs, prosper tourism and make Beijing more beautiful. Besides it will make China better known to the world. The others think the Olympics will also bring some trouble. For example, at that time, the traffic will be heavier and the environment will be destroyed. Furthermore, holding the Olympic Games will also cause more pollution and waste resources.

Some students believe there are many good effects. They think the Olympics will encourage people in Beijing to learn English harder, help more people find jobs, prosper tourism and make Beijing more beautiful.Besides,it will make China better known to the world.
Others think the Olympics will also bring some trouble. For example, at that time, the traffic will be heavier and the environment will be destroyed. Furthermore, holding the Olympic Games will also cause more pollution and waste resources.

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还有复数问题 troubles

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英语里面逗号分开的句子必须要有连词连接（除特殊句式外），则第一个第二个逗号后都应加and。

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