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a big earthquake
Earthquake is a merchless and terrible word.this year, a big earthquake happened in
wenchuan,sichuan.inthisearthquake ,hundreds of thousands of people were hurt ,also a lot of parents lost their children.they were very sad,but they never gave up,they carried the stone so that help their children go out of danger,but they couldn't help their children .when i see this scence,i couldn't help crying.it's so moving for me.at the same time,the government at once dispatch policemen,soldiers and firefighters to help the earthquake areas.then people all over the world know this information,many countries brought some money,water,food,machine,medicine and so on to help uictims of a natural calamity.
though they lost home,let us pray for the earthquake areas.
we believe earthquake areas tomorrow will be better.

a big earthquake
Earthquake is a merchless and terrible word.this year, a big earthquake happened in
wenchuan,sichuan.inthisearthquake ,hundreds of thousands of people were hurt ,also a lot of parents lost their children.they were very sad,but they never gave up,they carried the stone so that help their children go out of danger,but they couldn't help their children .when i see this scence,i couldn't help crying.it's so moving for me.at the same time,the government at once dispatch policemen,soldiers and firefighters to help the earthquake areas.then people all over the world know this information,many countries brought some money,water,food,machine,medicine and so on to help uictims of a natural calamity.
though they lost home,let us pray for the earthquake areas.
we believe earthquake areas tomorrow will be better