帮我检查下这段英文有什么病句

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I like music, I like the mode of random to enjoy music. So you don't know what music is the next. When I found my favourite music, I like the mode of cycle to enjoy music, listen it again and again. Isn't the life so?

我喜欢音乐，我喜欢用随机模式来听音乐。这样你就无法知道下首是什么音乐。当我找到我最喜欢的音乐时，我喜欢用循环模式来听它，一遍又一遍。生活不是这样吗？

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I like music. I like to enjoy music with the mode of random so that I have no idea what music will follow in the next. When I find my favourite music, I like to enjoy it with the mode of cycle and listen to it repeatedly. Isn't life like that?

I like music. I'd like to enjoy music with random mode so that I have no idea which music will follow next. When I find my favourite music, I will enjoy it with cycle mode and listen to it once and again. Isn't life just like that?

总体语病不大，可是mode of ^^这种说法不够地道，不够顺口。random mode 会更好。还有what music 应换成 which music.还有最后一句也不够通顺。应该是It is the same as our lives,isn't it?反问更加强调，突出你的观点

I like music, I like the random mode. So you don't know which song will be played. When I found the best one in my mind, I will repeat it again and again. It's the life, isn't?