帮忙修改一下这篇影评，谢谢！

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曾经，张穆然是一个坚强的代名词。。她是一名充满梦想的中学生，因身患癌症要面对病痛和死亡，然而她最终没有被病魔吓倒，以乐观的态度、坚强的决心与病魔抗争。她以积极的态度配合治疗，她用微笑和乐观的精神感染着身边的每一个人，然而仍旧没能挽回她年轻的生命。
This is a very amazing film.It was dicided by baiyu.zhangmuran is the leading roal.liupeiqi is her father in this film.
Zhangmuran is a good girl.She is a have dream's student.But she got cancer.She must face death and different.She decided chatenges with ill。she cure the ill.She use smile and happy make everyone behind her fed well.In the end she is death.

这是我自己写的 各位帮忙看一下 哪里有错误 帮忙修改一下 谢谢

Once, Zhang Muran is a strong synonymous. . She is a dream full of students, suffering from cancer due to face illness and death, but she ultimately was not intimidated by the disease, with an optimistic attitude and a strong determination and disease resistance. Her with a positive attitude with the treatment, she smiles and optimism in the spirit of everyone around, but still failed to save her young life.

She is a have dream's student这句话比较不地道。如果我会这么写：she is a girl who has an wonderful dream.
different是形容词.difficult
She decided 改decided to
she cure the ill .cure是治愈的意思。和电影内容不符。而且某人被治愈应该用被动。改she tried her best to fight with the cancer.
She use smile and happy make everyone behind her fed well.这句话问题太多。use，make 时态不对。fed过去式写错了felt。happy形容词当名词用了。乐观的精神 positive attitude.
she is death改she dead. is death强调的是死去这个状态。这里不恰当。