请帮修改个这篇短文,谢谢了!

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/21 23:25:58
During the spring and autumn period, the united force of twelve countries which included Jun and Song attacked the country Zheng. Zheng was scared, so they sued for peace. As a premiss, Zheng gave Jun a large sum of money and a great deal of jewelry and a group of beautiful girls.Jun Dao Gong, the king of Jun, immediately shared the tribute with the ministers. But Wei Jiang, one of those miniters, advised Jun Dao Gong to be prepared for danger in times of safety and not to be greedy for luxuriant life all day. Jun Dao Gong thought what Wei Jiang said was right and adopted his advice.

sue 控告，起诉－－－ 建议改为 appeal for

premiss 是不是想表达“妥协的前提”？这个前提是“抽象的立论前提”

钱，珠宝，美女之间不要用2个 and －－－－应该是 A, B, and C这样的形式

luxuriant茂密茂盛－－－是不是想写 luxurious a.奢侈的

稍微修改了一下：
During the period of spring and autumn , the united force of twelve countries ,which included Jun and Song, attacked the country Zheng. Zheng was scared, so they sued for peace. As a premiss, Zheng gave Jun a large sum of money ，a great deal of jewelry and a group of beautiful girls.Jun Dao Gong, the king of Jun, immediately shared the tribute with the ministers. But Wei Jiang, one of those miniters, advised Jun Dao Gong to prepar for danger in the times of safety and not to be greedy for luxuriant life all day long. Jun Dao Gong thought what Wei Jiang said was right and adopted his advice.