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This artical is very important in this module.First becauese when we were children, the people around us always said that we should study hard then we can find good jobs.We should choose jobs which help others or do good for the society in the future.
the people around us always（去掉第一个the)
we can find good jobs（can 变成could,因为主句为过去式)
这样会不会好一点
This article is very important in this module.Frist,when we were children,the people around us always tell us that we should study hard so that we can find good jobs.We should choose jobs which can help others or can do good for the society in the future.
你那个有点拼写错误