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My dream
Today,a friend said to me,"hello,what'your deam?""Dream?"I start thinking a lot,"If I can decision,I want to be a scientist as famous as Edison.Beacause of I want to invent so many things and give them to the everybody,this is a sacred and honorable thing".But I think,too,"Now what can I do for my dream?That is study hard and finish it when I grow up!"
虽然漏洞百出
Today,a friend said to me,"hello,what'your deam?""Dream?"I start thinking a lot,"If I can decision,I want to be a scientist as famous as Edison.Beacause of I want to invent so many things and give them to the everybody,this is a sacred and honorable thing".But I think,too,"Now what can I do for my dream?That is study hard and finish it when I grow up!"
虽然漏洞百出
【写的还行，能明白什么意思，呵呵】
My dream
Today,a friend asked me,"hello,what'your dream?""Dream?"I started thinking a lot,"If I can decide,I want to be a scientist as famous as Edison. Beacause I want to invent so many things and give them to everybody, it is sacred and honorable".But I also think that,"How can I make my dream come true? Finally I got an answer - study hard and finish it when I grow up!"
decision--decide
Beacause of--Because
is study --is to study 或者 is studying
grow--have grown
我的梦想
今天，一个朋友问我“你好，你的梦想是什么？”“梦想？”我考虑了很久“如果我可以决定，我想但一个和爱迪生一样有名的科学家。因为我想发明很多东西并送给每一个人，这是件神圣而光荣的事”但我也想到“我现在可以为我的梦想做什么？那就是努力学习，然后长大后实现它”
真的有一大堆语法错误