英语句子～帮忙用英语写一下～要正确的语法～

珍惜身边的每一个人，用生命保护我爱的人～不再伤害她们，不让他们流泪。
I will cherish everyone around me and protect those I love with my life～ I will never hurt them, nor let them shed a tear.

语法是对的。

To cherish everyone who is around,to protect the one I love by my life.Not to hurt them again and not to make them cry.

Treasure close to everyone, with the protection of lives of the people I love not to harm them, so they shed tears.