哪位高手帮忙看看这个5句话英语作文

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/02 02:52:26
情景说明：
我区电视台计划举办英语夏令营活动，起止时间和内容安排如下：
时间：8月10日-22日
内容：参加英语角，学唱英语歌曲，听英语讲座，表演英语短剧，看英语电影，教外宾学中文

请按要求给予答复：
1。选择适合你的时间并说明理由；
2。虽然你认为所有的活动都有意义，但你只能参加“英语角”和“教外宾学中文”两项活动；
3。说明理由：选择“教外宾学中文”是因为08年北京奥运会让越来越多的外国人想更多地了解中国；参加英语角可以和外国人交流，提高口语。

高手帮忙修改下下面这篇文章……

XX TV Station,
I am very glad to take part in the English Summer Camp you hold from August 10th to 22nd, but only August 15th to 22nd is possible for me because I won’t come back to Guangzhou from Beijing until August 15th. There are so many interesting activities like English Corner, learning to sing English songs, listening English lectures, performing English short plays, watching English movies, and teaching foreign guests Chinese. All of them are so significant but I can only take part in two activities, that is English Corner and teaching foreign guests Chinese. The reason why I choose English Corner is that I can communicate with foreigners at there in order to improve my o

你的作文写得非常的流利,几乎没有语病.下面的文章我吹毛求疵帮你修改了下,可以参考.

I am very glad to participate in the English Summer Camp held from 10th to 12th August. As I will have a visit to Beijing, I may only join after 15th August. Among the activities, such as English Corner, learning English songs, English lectures, performing English plays, watching
English movies and teaching foreigners Chinese etc . I think I am interested in English Corner and teaching Chinese, for I would like to improve my oral English from communicating with foreigners in English Corner and teaching them Chinese is a quite meaningful job I think, for many foreigners will be more and more interested in China through the Olympic Games, so I feel proud to bridge China with the world to let everyone know more about our country.

XX TV Station,
I am very glad to take part in the English Summer Camp you hold from August 10th to 22nd, but only August 15th to 22nd is possible for me because I won’t come back to Guangzh