请帮我把这段翻译确认一下有无语病~很简单的

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爷爷,奶奶,姑姑,哥哥共同祝你生日快乐!
送你一个蛋糕,祝你天天快乐~就如吃了这巧克力蛋糕一般~心中久久充满甜蜜!

Your grandfather, grandmother, aunt and brother common wish you a happy birthday!
Send you a cake, I wish you every day happy to eat it as normal to the hearts of chocolate cake filled with sweet long time
如果觉得有问题~帮我翻译一下,被采纳的话可以追加10分的

昏,你这不是很传统的中式英语吗?中国都能看懂,外国人我不敢包了。

我给你翻译了--

Grandfather, grandmother, aunt and brother wish you happy birthday!

We present you a birthday cake, wish you happy everyday. Your heart will be full of sweet such as having this chocolate cake.

表达上有歧义,不知道你要给谁祝福!你在口头上表达的时候,注意语气哈,要把字词分开哈!就是说注意停顿。