哪位大侠帮我修改下自我介绍啊

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My name is XX You can call me XX as my english name.
Igraduated from XXX I have served as foreign teacher's assistant in the school.Ihave ever practised as written translatorin XXXX.
I have a serious attitude towards everthing i do. Ihave a strong sense of arganizing and cooperating.During my high school life I have done everthing prepty accompany with you company development and progress.Your trust my capability will bring us success.

我这个是通过翻译软件 翻译的 貌似很不准确 个别的词也用的不好 还有时态 是个很严重的问题 谢谢 帮忙改的人
这个是中文
大家好 我叫。。。我的英文名字是Elika 大家可以叫我ELIKA(就是说英文名字的时候 这样的表达方式是不是有点不太通顺啊?麻烦你帮忙改下这吧)毕业于。。。曾经在某某有限公司实习做过翻译(小组为单位的 是笔译)在校做过外教助理

Hello,everyone!
My name is XX You can call me XX ask to me to my English name— ELIKA .
I graduated from XXX I have served as foreign teacher's assistant in the school.Ihave ever practised as written translatorin XXXX.
I have a serious attitude towards everthing i do. Ihave a strong sense of arganizing and cooperating.During my high school life I have done everthing prepty accompany with you company development and progress.Your trust my capability will bring us success.

帮你做了少量修改 谢谢

貌似,这个人给你翻译的人也是二把刀啊。
没法给你改,呵呵,中国英语你说了,英国人能听懂吗?

翻译的还可以啦