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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/16 02:13:14
While the mankinds were going out of the darkness, our civilization and knowledge began to boom apace. As we all know, one of the knowledge is called science, and the other one is called arts. Both of them have compared us for several centuries until today. If we have to select which is more important for us, I will say it would be science.
As a common sense, science consists mathematic, physics, chemical, biology and so forth. When our scientists get some breakthrough, such as high-tech material, or new technology in biological medicines, it can make contribution to the whole burgeoning society immediately. With these accomplishments, not only manufacturers but individuals as well will profit. Mostly, our supreme prides are lie on the science. Thousands upon thousands skyscrapers, autocratic laboratories, presto computers, precise surgeries and satellites orbiting the earth, are all the prides of the hardworking scientists who always to be as busy as bees.
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看了一下,句子都很好,专业知识没有查,不敢确定。真得不错,我觉得大家都可以看一下,很多句子甚至可以背下来,用得很地道,将来写东西很有用。

As we all know, one of the knowledge is called science, and the other one is called arts.

改成:As we all know, one of the knowledge is called science, and another one is called arts.
知识不能全部分为2块吧,知识有很多面的