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Do you know Alex Hua Tian? He is an equestrianism player. He was born on October 25th, 1989. And he is half Chinese and half British. He started to ride when he was 5 years old. He became the professional equestrianism player when he was 14. Before him, no one can be a professional equestrianism player before the age of 16. But in 2006, he renounced his native land. Now he lives in Guangdong province of China.
He is the youngest player of 4 stars. He is so talented. And he has been in this Olympics in Hong Kong. Unfortunately, he fell down from the horse. He failed in this match, but he is just a student, he renounced his native land and came to China, he suspended his schooling for this match. He is still a hero because he is the first to take part in the men’s equestrianism, although he didn’t win the match.
I believe him, and I think he will win the next match in London.

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