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It’s said that different colours of clouds predict different weather .Let me take the dark black ones for instance ,it means it will be rainy soon. If you saw red clouds around the sun began to rise ,you woule had better not go outside. It must be uwful weather soon.
The clouds of different shapes make us interested .They also predict different weather .Like the ones look like cottons,they means that you have to be with an umbrella . when you leave your home . Sorry,I always take the bad ones for example .I think the steamed bread will have you feel better.That the shapes of clouds look like them shows a fine day .

you woule had better not go outside
you would had better not go outside

they means that you have to be with an umbrella
they means that you have to take an umbrella

I think the steamed bread will have you feel better.That the shapes of clouds look like them shows a fine day
I think the steamed bread will have you feel better for that kind of clouds show a fine day

修改的很好!

It’s said that different colours of clouds predict different weather .Let me take the dark black ones for instance ,it means it will be rainy soon. If you saw red clouds around the sun began to rise ,you would had better not go outside It must be uwful weather soon.
The clouds of different shapes make us interested .They also predict different weather .Like the ones look like cottons,they means that you have to be with an umbrella . when you leave your home . Sorry,I always take the bad ones for example .I think the steamed bread will have you feel better.Tha