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Have you ever been to Paris ? Here are many famous building like Cathedral of Notre Dame. It’s best-known church in the would. The Cathedral of Notre Dame is a building of Goethe type. In this church, if you would like to visit, you could see many beautiful statues. Every one has their own special features. Some one are very tall and others are shout. Some person's form statue looks happy and others looks sad, can you guess what are this person think? In addition to Cathedral of Notre Dame, you also could visit Eiffel Tower. If you were in the top of Eiffel Tower, you can see all the sight of Paris. And Eiffel Tower is near the Rhine side.
Paris is a heaven for the people who like building.

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It’s one of the best-known would-world

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Each has its own particular feature.

Some are very tall and others are short
Some people-like statues look happy and others look sad

can you guess what DO thESEs person think? In addition to Cathedral of Notre Dame, you CAN ALSO visit Eiffel Tower. WHEN YOU ON the top of Eiffel Tower, you can see all the sightS of Paris. And Eiffel Tower is near the Rhine side.
Paris is a heaven for the people who likeS ARCHITECTURE.

第1行buildings
第2行the Cathedral of Notre Dame
It’s one of the best-known churchs
第4行Each one has
第5行Some are very tall and others are short
第7行what are these people think
第8行you could also visit the Eiffel Tower
第9行could see the whole sight of Paris
最后一行for people