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Hello!Everyone. My name is J...I am from China. Ihave Been in United States for ten months. Even though I have been here for a long time , I still miss my Chinese friends . I always remember the happy time with them. In the other hand , I know I should adapt myself to new manners when I go to a new country. When I have just arrived here, I think it's a good place to live in. Because there are many greenbelts and trees in and around the city, the fresh air makes me feel comfortable.After two weeks, I began to go to school. I got nervous and worried on my first schoolday. You know ,before we get into the school, we must scan our school IDs. But I didn't get my ID card yet., then the teacher asked me what my ID number is , the problem was I didn't know that. So I took out the roster papper. I wanted to look for the ID number from it. Then I showed the number to the teachr, she shouted to me,"Give me the ID number". Iasked'"Is this the ID number?"She sho

以下是我的修改。碍于篇幅，无法一一列出修改之处，但是你自己可以对比一下！你文章基本上是成功的，虽然也存在着如时态对应，“美国”的拼写，以及句子的构成等的问题！

Hello, Everyone! My name is J...I am from China. I have been in the United States for ten months. Even though I have been here for a long time, I still miss my Chinese friends. I always remember the happy time with them. On the other hand, I know I should adapt myself to new manners when I go to a new country. When I just arrived here, I thought it's a good place to live in. Because there are many greenbelts and trees in and around the city, and the fresh air makes me feel comfortable. After two weeks, I began to go to school. I felt nervous and worried on my first schoolday. You know, before we get into the school, we must scan our school IDs. But then I didn't get my ID card yet, so when the teacher asked me what my ID number was, I didn't know that. So I took out the roster papper. I wanted to find the ID number from it. When I showed the number to the teacher, she shouted to me