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My favorite singer is Miley Cyrus. She was born in November 23, 1992, in Franklin, Tennessee. The first time I saw her in the Shanghai Foreign Language Channel. I was surprised that she was my age .
Miley is known as a star of Disney Channel's Hannah Montana. She became a TV star at the age of 13.She was break into the Forbes list with the highest income child on the end of last year.
Don’t think Miley is only a girl who can sing songs, in fact she is good at create songs. The songs in Hannah Montana are created by her own, and she sang them. The song “I miss you” was write for her dead grandfather in 2006, and "See You Again" and "GNO (Girls'Night Out)" have been performed in the Disney Channel's concerts.
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Miley is known as a star of Disney Channel's Hannah Montana. She became a TV star at the age of 13.She was break into the Forbes list with the highest income child on the end of last year.
Don’t think Miley is only a girl who can sing songs, in fact she is good at create songs. The songs in Hannah Montana are created by her own, and she sang them. The song “I miss you” was write for her dead grandfather in 2006, and "See You Again" and "GNO (Girls'Night Out)" have been performed in the Disney Channel's concerts.
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第一行was born on
第三行was of my age
第五行broke， was 去掉，at the end of last year
第七行creating
第八行on her own
第九行was written
at the end of last year
Don't think Miley is only a girl……改为
Apart from singing song, Miley is good at composeing songs
was write for 改为 was written for