qing帮我改下英语作文 谢谢

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“Journey to Nunavut: The Kreelak Story” is a short movie directed by Ole Gjerstad and Martin Kreelak in 1999. It tells us the story about a three generations Inuit family (which is probably the last Canada’s nomads), their early life as hunters until today, where young adults grow up in government-created settlements. I agree that Martin Kreelak has done a very good job by pointing out, in the movie, a very serious problem: assimilation.

First of all, the Canadian residential school system in 19th-20th century shows clearly an effort to assimilate aboriginal people into mainstream Canadian society. The system consisted of schools especially for aboriginal children set up by Anglican, Catholic and Presbyterian churches. A major problem of residential school is that some young boys and girls who attended residential school were physically or sexually abused. In 2008, the government made a statement to apologize to these people. In the movie, Martin Kreelak talks about his own

They would experience severe punishments if they are 这个换成were

After all, it’s not difficult 除非是对话,否则写作文的时候切忌用it's之类的,要用it is,把完整的写出来

That’s why
如上,把完整的写出来 that is why

As what we know 要写成as of what we know

Grandparents have difficulties to talk with their grandchildren. 这个换成communicating/talking, 不需要to,这个我不知道怎么解释,不过英文就是这样

In conclusion, I must say that I’m totally disagree 直接写I totally disagree就可以了 否则你的语法就错了

and it’s clearly shown 把it is完整的写出来

请问你是在做social studies吗? 类似这种文章,你的explanation还不够