UC知道找人修改一下英文短文
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/25 15:20:19
Today, Mum and I go to Guangzhou. There is the 5th golden dragon award domestic and oversea animation&comicmasters autograph session on today.Of course,my favorite painter shel also in here.so I want to get her personal signature and see her.The Signature Ceremony in goushuzhongxin.There are lots of people are lining up when us get there .we are waiting in the last.Afer long time,we become first one. I find painters’ signature very quickly.I gets her signature and we have a picture. I am very happy.
How wonderful day it is!
建议使用过去时 其他的在下面给你更正了 改的要是不好 你可以再改回来 呵呵
A wonderful day
Today, Mum and I went to Guangzhou. There was the 5th golden dragon award domestic and oversea animation&comicmasters autograph session today.Of course,my favorite painter was also there.I wanted to get her personal signature and see her.The Signature Ceremony is in goushu center.Many people were lining up when we got there .we waited in the last.Afer a long time,we became the first one of the line. I found painters all signed very quickly.I got her signature and took a picture with her. I was very happy.
How wonderful day it is!
go to - went to
There is the 5th golden dragon award domestic and oversea animation&comicmasters autograph session on today - The 5th Golden Dragon Award and the autograph session of domestic as well as international animation and comic masters were being held today.
painter - artist
also in here - was also there
want - wanted
personal signature - autog