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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/21 04:24:16
Nowadays it is more and more common to using animals for experimentation purpose, duing to the development of science. But it is in the light of an expectation someone think that it is cruel and opposed, others think it is the needs of society and supported, There is no denying that the two views both have the proper sides.

First of all, for some opposers, they feel that animals also have life and heart like people, When being sliced, they can feel being in pain, when being bad mood, no doubt, they also will put into worry and upset. However it is obvious that animals should take any respect from everybody. In the second place, to opposer themselves, possessing the belief and kindness is the most important reason why they are to feel cruel about animals experiment and have a desire to protect one’s life, such as bonze, follower of a religion and those who will be sad for a long time because of killing a small ant. Human appeal to peace and friend with animals, in a sense, b

Nowadays it is more and more common to "using"
前面用了to,后面应该用原形use.其次,more and more 和common 用在一起,就重复了.
duing to the development of science.
这个想说什么意思?"during to"建议查英英词典,了解during 的用法.如果想说"通过科学进步"不能用during,不是地道用法.

But it is in the light of an expectation someone think that it is cruel and opposed,
不清楚为什么要用but开头,似乎和前面没有转折关系."it is in the light of"太长了，影响中心表达. "opposed"观点本身不会自己反对自己,所以这个词在这里也不恰当;如果想说有人觉得它很残忍,所以反对,建议用因果介词"therefore"
others think it is the needs of society and supported, There is no denying that the two views both have the proper sides.

第一段应该是全篇的主旨,要不赞同,要不反对,考试作文忌讳摸另两可的开头.

possessing the belief and kindness
这句没看明白
why they are to feel
用why they feel就可以了
animals experiment
animal experiments,复数用的地方不对
and have a desire to protect one’s life, such as bonze, follower of a religion and those who will be sad for a long time becaus