大家帮我看看这样写对吗？翻译下？

Hello! My name is Li Qi. My English name is Rocky. I like playing basketball and dancing. l love these game! Because of Michael Jordan's and Michael Jackson's sorts of style. I like them very much! Sorry, I cannot speak a lot of very good and fluent English. What’s your opinion?
哈罗!我的名字叫李奇.我的英语名字是Rocky.我喜欢玩篮球和跳舞.我爱这些活动!是因为迈克尔·乔丹的和迈克尔·杰克逊的风格.我非常喜欢他们!遗憾,我不能说很好和流利的英语，你对此有什么建议吗？

because I like michael jordan and michael jackson and that kind of stars very much! Sorry, my English is not good. what’s your opinion about me?

人名请全部换成大写开头。另外，表达不太清楚。只能帮你改成这样的。。。
希望可以啦。。。

不对.like+doing.句子中文式.语法错误.注意大小写

错了语法